A Solution #E100
Noah’s-Ark-floats-Chapelle-Sistine (Photo credit: ideacreamanuelaPps)
A Solution
And God saw that it was
Corrupt.
Water from the deep,
Mixed with water from the sky:
It’s the destruction of Creation
With only one place left that’s dry.
Noah’s microcosm:
God spoke
A bespoke
Escape pod–
All aboard!
God shut the door.
Coated with pitch,
The boat
Floated and pitched
The only place,
A lonely place.
A black, blind, bubble of life -
All life
Looking for land.
High and bobbing
Over submerged mountains:
Stagnant planet,
Death soup.
Hope floats.
This is yours? I like it.
Yes this is mine from my reading today. I wasn’t that happy with it, but it’s growing on me.
I really like it.
This is so very good, the perfect amount of ominous finished with a perfect dose of hope.
Thanks Laurie
I like it too